Rough Cut 1

Mrs Willcox gave us feedback for our rough cut 1, what we needed to was add in logos and titles to make sure the opening scene looked professional.
We were also told to steady the footage so it wasn't too shaky and again look professional for a film. Addition to this we needed to make the phone text much closer and clearer so it would be easier for the audience to see what it said. The transition match was very slick and clear that was well presented, but we needed to slow the footage down to prevent it from going too fast and making it look finished.
We needed to ensure our film title goes after the first two actors names to follow the conventions.